
Written by Stacey McKibbin (staceymckibbin@actioncoach.com)
So you want to write an ad that gets suspected customers to take action to call or come in to your place of business, do you? Not happy with the hundreds or thousands of dollars you’re “investing” in your marketing activities with little to no response? Well, you’ve come to the right place!
As some of you may or may not know, there are 3 steps to creating powerful ads.
Step 1: Identify clearly who your target market is.
Step 2: Create a compelling offer, and
Step 3: Write the copy.
We are going to focus on Step 2 this time, creating a compelling offer.
Before touching on the offer component, I would like to briefly bring our attention back to Step #1…Clearly understanding your target market. This is a very critical step to ensuring your offer is of value. Why? Because different people find value in different things. For instance, Volvo and Mercedes customers are generally not the same. Meaning, they target two different types of drivers. Both sets of customers drive cars, however, the Volvo consumer values safety and security; whereas, the Mercedes consumer values innovation, excellence and automobile styling. You wouldn’t use the same ad to sell both cars…you’d instead have the Volvo ad focus on demonstrating its latest in safety features and you’d have the Mercedes ad tout its latest innovations in styling and gadgetry so as to have the greatest “appeal” to their target market. Make sense? Great…now let’s move on to creating that powerful offer.
After you’ve gotten very clear on WHO your target audience is for this offer, the second thing you need to determine what kind of offer you’d like to make. There are 7 different types to consider:
1. The Added Value with Soft Dollar cost. This means the value is more “perceived” than actual. Another way of saying it, the value is “in the eye of the beholder” rather than being an actual “hard” cost that is added to your expenses. This is referring to products, services or extras that you combine with your regular, standard product to make it more attractive and appealing to your target audience.
2. The Package Offer. Create a unique offering in the marketplace by bundling your products and services together. This will enable you to be able to offer your regular product or service at a higher price because of the additional items included. (This is a great strategy for increasing your average dollar sale too!) A great example of this is when cable companies bundle their services. Buy the cable and internet, get your phone for free or at a discounted rate.
3. Discounts vs Bonus Offers. If there’s one thing we know, it’s that discounting not only erodes your profit margin but also the quality of future shoppers. Once we start the discounting, we begin attracting price sensitive customers who have very little to no loyalty to one vendor. They simply hop around from deal to deal. So rather than attracting that kind of customer, instead offer bonuses. 2 for 1 sales, buy one get one free sales, buy 9 get the 10th free, spend $100 save $10 on your next purchase. I know you may be thinking this is semantics, and it largely is. But think about it, in the discounting scenario, you are giving money away off of the first and only purchase. In the bonus scenario, you are conditioning them to pay full price to receive their special deal.
4. Valued at Offers. If your offer is to give away a free “consultation” or other free introductory service/product, be sure to add a dollar value amount. For example, come check out our free workshop to learn the top 5 profit strategies to build any business. A $79 value. Or a free 1 hour consultation, valued at $395. The main intent here is to position your time, product and service a much more than a free giveaway. (Be careful with this one, as most consumers have been conditioned to believe that ‘free consultation’ means permission to sell to them for an hour. THIS IS NOT THE CASE! Be sure to use this time to help them solve their problems and then watch as they ask you how to get more involved with your service.)
5. Time Limited Offers. Creating urgency is important to getting people to take action NOW. Not later…NOW. I’m sure you’ve received the offer from your local dentist for a free cleaning that can be used any time this year. You may even hold onto it, but when do you use it? if you’re like most, at the last possible moment! So place a time limit on your offer to increase the immediate response rate. Seats are limited, For a limited time only, While supplies last, and so on.
6. Guarantee Offers. Why offer a guarantee? 2 reasons: 1.) It takes the fear out of buying and 2.) It is a differentiator from your competitors. Not sure what to guarantee? Ask your customers this single question: “What frustrates you most when dealing with my industry?” (Not my company, my industry.) This will tell you what challenges are most frequently experienced so you can write a guarantee to mitigate it. For example, graphic designers have a bad rap for not returning calls and being hard to get a hold of once you’ve started working together. So write the headline, “Tired of your graphic designers always disappearing when you need them most? We guarantee to return all calls within 24hours or we’ll take $100 off your next bill.”
7. Free Offers. I don’t see this strategy utilized all that often, which is a great reason in and of itself to use it. Give something away free of charge with no strings attached. Customers will have to “see it to believe it” and they will tell many other folks about it! Especially if it’s something they really like. This is an awesome offer for restaurants and other businesses who have specialty or custom items that can easily be given away to demonstrate quality. Give away the chocolate éclair that everyone raves about or the dessert pizza that’s to die for. Once they are in the door, turn up the charm and make sure you capture their information so you can invite them back! Surprisingly, this type of offer can dramatically reduce your “cost per lead” because of the effectiveness getting people in the door.
Some examples of strong vs weak offers:
Strong Offers:
- Free haircut – for a hair dresser looking to increase his/her database
- 2 Steak Dinners and 2 Glasses of Wine for $50. – a restaurant recruiting members for their VIP Club
- Buy 10 sandwiches, get the 11th free. – a deli looking to increase the number of times 1 customer comes back to them.
- Bring a friend, get $5 towards your next class – a gym or dance studio looking to increase their database
- Complimentary Design Consultation – a custom interior designer or custom wood worker looking to increase leads.
Weak Offers:
- 10% off – this is not enough to compel someone to take action.
- Buy 10 get 11th half off. – not much of an incentive.
- 90% Off for new Clients – This will alienate your current client base and may cause you churn thru prospects (ie GroupOn)
Once you’ve selected the type of offer you’d like to use, then you can move on to writing the copy of the ad itself. Be sure to test and measure the ad before sending it to print. Share it with clients you trust, strategic partners, your business coach, and any other people you believe are in the target market you’re trying to talk to. Remember, the reason why people come and try your service, is because you are serving a need or want what they have. So speak to the emotion of “what’s in it for THEM” to do business with you.
And remember, a great rule of thumb is the “Would I Respond?” (WIR) question. Ask yourself, would I respond to this offer? If the answer is no, then time to hit the drawing board once again.
Here’s to your success!
Stacey McKibbin
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